Sunday, August 16, 2009

While She Slept

He showed her around his place......It was new, so there wasn't much to show, but he knew it was a great idea to have gotten his place, rather than have her stay with all his boys.....she was shy for sumone who talked a lot and and new a lot of people......Then she went into the room, to go shower.....

As he heard, the water running....he decided this was a good chance as any to get in his last smoke, at least for the next 2weeks.....He really liked her, cos he couldn't believe he was going to attempt to not smoke for as long as she was here, she really hated it and was always telling him all the health reasons why he shouldn't be smoking......he called her a nag once she started, but he knew it was cos she cared.....

By the time, he got back in.....he didn't hear the shower running.....so he knocked on the door to the room.....they were going to go have dinner, at his favorite restaurant, before he took her to this party his friend was throwing.....he couldn't get out of the party, but he also liked that he could show her off and introduce her to his friends......plus he knew it would definitely lighten the mood and elevate the tension that had been around since he picked her up, a tension so thick, he could practically cut it with a sword......she liked to dance and loved music, it should be fun

No answer, he knocked again......as he peeked in, there she was on the bed.....she had slept in her towel too.......she must have been really beat......as he pulled the covers over her, and sat beside her.....he thought to himself, that he was a lucky man......she wasn't perfect, but she was damn well great.....it was 6months ago, he asked her out and even then he wasn't entirely sure what he was doing......who started a relationship with someone you met physically only once prior and lived a thousand miles away????......

She is the one, he thought......not like he was ready to give her a ring anytime soon, he knew it would take him some time to get there......and it was just his luck that he had found the only girl in the world, who had no time line for marriage......yet, he knew he didn't want to ruin this.....he found it amazing that she had been faithful to him.....girls of today he thought were rather loose....and he had equally been faithful.....he knew she didn't believe it, neither did his boys.....for some reason he couldn't explain, he couldn't hurt her that way......

He wasn't sure that they would work out, he wasn't sure that after they had sex, things wont change.....the interest could have only been in the chase.....He was becoming a loser, he thought....one of those mushy boys......he definitely needed a beer..... He then bent over, to give her a kiss on the lips..........

I felt it, it was one of those soft feathery kisses you read about in novels......
I opened my eyes......it was real.....and not a dream........
Eyes locked on each other, his lips still on mine.........no one moved.......

to be continued......xxxxxx

10 comments:

  1. @Anon.....LOL, I will try to write it soon enuff

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  2. I like this....story is getting interesting as it goes...look foward to the next.

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  3. @Anon.....I'm glad u like it, thanks for stopping by

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  4. see me anticipating like everyone else. tomorrow is the next one right?

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  5. lol.....Oye.....I will try....

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  6. are you sure you still want to be a doctor
    or a writer?

    this is good. like it (smooth, clean)

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  7. awww thanks Tisha, if only i knew, who you were????....but i think im going to do doth, God willing....Dr as per Phd sha, not med doctor....

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  8. Na wa o! Can't wait to read the next one. I like the style of writing.

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