Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Tip of my tongue

He screamed out "her" name in pleasure….except it wasn't the her giving him the amazing blow job, at this point he couldn't remember her name….. and gaddammmmmitt was it amazing, he honestly couldn't say if it was amazing cos she was that good or because the release had been months coming

You see he hadn't been with "her" or anyone for 6months and he was tired and had really tried to take care of his needs himself – he had almost finished the jar of Vaseline and was feeling like a loser – he was becoming the butt of all the jokes from his friends who knew he was waiting on her…. The phone calls, texts, blackberry messages, seeing her on skype – nothing was working to keep him from wanting her so close

He had been denied the visa to come see her and she couldn't get time off work as she was having problems with her boss – He liked to call her a witch cos she was stressing his girl and made him a wanker

He wasn't ashamed to admit he loved sex, he was a healthy young man with a healthy appetite for a woman's body, and sex with her had made him more vibrant than he ever thought possible and now she was the fetish, his very fantasy come to life and he hadn't had her for six months – all he wanted was her, on his new table in the kitchen and on the loveseat they never got around to using her last trip – he had actually gotten her to undress for him while they were on skype together a couple times, she was so shy and cute and then she would smile and it just took his breath away

Lately though, they fought a lot – the distance was beginning to affect even her – and their last fight was silly in retrospect

She had called to tell him that one of their friends was trying to hit on her – he was still going to knock that nigger out the first chance he got – but she had said it so casually like it was no big deal – in her own words "if he thought that no other guy was interested in her, then he wasn't thinking straight" at which point he cut the phone, cos it was at the tip of his tongue to tell her to go to hell and to end the damn relationship that got him nothing in anycase, other than this longing feeling…..she had said none of the other guys offered her anything and all she wanted was him because she loved him, but how was he to trust her?what was he really offering her ?– gosh he hated this – he hated how this love he felt made him feel insecure, made him feel only complete when he was with her – this feeling that made him feel like a selfish jerk thinking only about having sex with her

Truth is he wanted more than anything to make love with her – but he also wanted to watch a soccer game with her, she was an Arsenal fan, he a Liverpool fan and he loved the rivalry – he loved watching her swim, cos he wouldn't be caught dead in a pool, he hated the water – he wanted to watch family guy with her, she didn't understand the show and the only thing funnier than stewie and the gang was watching how perplexed she was at the jokes he thought were hilarious

Screw the melancholy – he was tired of caring and so he decided to go out for drinks that night – got drunk and two hrs later – he was back home with a girl whose name he couldn't remember and on the tip of his tongue was the name of the woman he desired even as he felt that sweet release of come.... as he escorted her out his place moments later – he felt the need for a very hot, unforgiving shower – cos he felt slightly dirty and didn't know why


To be continued………….

19 comments:

  1. all i can sat is OMG!!! Great imagination.

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  2. U know what? Fuck Mills & Boon girl, This is the shit!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. Wow, you're really good. The voice of this guy is so real! Well done, I'm looking forward to part 2.

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  4. @bukky - thanks dear

    @diane - thanks, cant wait for what o?

    @Sugarking - awwww, thank you dear, i appreciate it

    @Myne - thanks, it actually started a while back - from "Our Journey" - but yea continuation coming soon

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  5. heya....cant blame d boy for hitting his limit....women can witstand temptation longer

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  6. "Screw the melancholy – he was tired of caring and so he decided to go out for drinks that night – got drunk and two hrs later – he was back home with a girl whose name he couldn't remember and on the tip of his tongue was the name of the woman he desired even as he felt that sweet release of come..."

    so when i feel depressed, can i go out an get laid? No that sounds like an excuse to me. Why do guys do such? Its disgusting (Yes i have said it). i don't buy that, you love one woman but can sleep with another...

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  7. @ Mr Jegede...yea yea watever, how u been?

    @ Tisha - lol, he didn't sleep with her, it was just a blow job....but i get your point def..how u doing ma?

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  8. @David .... hey boo, you need to say it o...i don't get, lol

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  9. mmm the guy enjoy sha.....well we'll see what happens next...nicely done babe

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  10. Thanks babe ....i appreciate it

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  11. @neefemi
    just saying my mind. hope you are not offended. good thing your writing can get me reeled up. for moi, a blow-job, hand job, the works, whatever, its all the same to me.

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  12. lol...not offended at all babes and i def get your point

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  13. hahahahahah ... that was on point ... i feel that way to sometime ... screw the melancholy ..nice one babe ... i have a lot of catching up to do on ur blog

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  14. love ur imagination...
    bighead

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  15. @Suki.....awwww just read this - thank u very much

    @bighead.....thanks

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  16. i know i'm late but i finally caught up with the story and all i can say is OMG!!! What the hell was he thinking...oh crap. I agree with Tisha...that excuse is crap...i can't wait to read what happens next...there is a continuation right?

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  17. Lol, Shade i ended it with the final straw(http://intern-unpaid.blogspot.com/2009/12/special-monday.html) i am so glad you liked it all, thank you very much

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